Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Super swmming at camp
I made my animation with shapes and this is an animation about my favourite thing
at camp . Have you ever bean on camp before?
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Kia ora, Emmelia
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you were going swimming It, looked like you were having lot's of fun. Did you think about adding more slides but it was really cool to watch. Next time you could do edit a bit more punctuation. Who did you do this with?
i did not do it with anyone but i will put more slids on and punctuation thankyou.
DeleteI enjoyed the part when the heads popped out of the swimming pool.
ReplyDeleteDid you think of adding some more slide?
I like your animation but I wish there were more slides.
Hi Emmelia I would mainly say the same as liam but more slides because some times I didn't know the right speed to go and a bit more detail other than its good.
ReplyDeletethank you i will.
DeleteI think next time you should add more slides. But I liked your presentation and I found out what your experience was on camp.
ReplyDeletei think you should bot more slids in
ReplyDeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you presented your side about camp. Maybe next time you could ,make the animation longer.